The predator spider feisty spider. It is dark black and red.It has lightning bolts on his back.It is called predator because it could balloon and hunt and could sneak up on its prey.
Hey Ana! It’s me again, I don’t think I need an introduction. Judging by the work you are posting, I’m pretty sure you’re learning about Insects or maybe Spiders. Wow! I didn’t know a Predator Spider had lightning bolts on it’s back! Even though that part of your Writing was brilliant. I still think you need to check your Writing before you post it. I don’t understand the part where you say “It could balloon and hunt” and so on. Well, that’s all for now, I hope you learn from my advice. Brilliant Work!
Hey Ana!
ReplyDeleteIt’s me again, I don’t think I need an introduction. Judging by the work you are posting, I’m pretty sure you’re learning about Insects or maybe Spiders.
Wow! I didn’t know a Predator Spider had lightning bolts on it’s back! Even though that part of your Writing was brilliant. I still think you need to check your Writing before you post it. I don’t understand the part where you say “It could balloon and hunt” and so on. Well, that’s all for now, I hope you learn from my advice.
Brilliant Work!