Friday, 18 March 2016

Little red riding kiwi

Walt: retell a story with a significant twist

Once upon a time in a far far forest there was a kiwi that lived in a cottage with her mother kiwi.The Kiwi always loved to wear her red hood that's how she got her nickname little red riding kiwi but for short little red.One day her mother kiwi told the kiwi that her grandma was sick. So the mother asked if she could drop off some of her homemade cookies so the little kiwi said yes and lift of to the forest but beware of the big bad kangaroo said Mrs kiwi but in a scared voice.

So she was walking threw the forest to her Grandma's Cottage singing songs when she saw another path with flowers. She felt sad that her sweet old grandmother was sick so she went walking in another direction were the flowers was planted.While she was picking her some flower there was a big bad kangaroo hiding in the bushes.The big bad kangaroo walked up to little red riding kiwi and said hi little kiwi whos those cookies for.LIttle kiwi replied it's for my poor sick granny kiwi.

        Oh Mr kangaroo felt he could eat her now but he wanted to eat granny too. So he asked where her granny lived and she said her grandma lived in the south forest by the seven dwarfs. So the big bad kangaroo left to grandma kiwis house.

The big bad kangaroo went to granny's and hid behind her bed then he surprised granny. She got scared and fainted so the kangaroo put granny in the closet, and dressed as her.So the kangaroo lay on granmas bed and waited for little red riding kiwi.
An hour later little red riding kiwi arrived at grandma's house and gave the kangaroo a hug little red riding kiwi was thought that she looked strange.What big eyes you have all the better to see you with darling. What big ears you have all the better hear u with. What big hands you have all to better to hug you with. What big teeth you have all the better to eat you with she screamed so loud that the seven dwarf heard her scream so they chopped his head off and then they lived happily ever after

Task description: My task was to retell little red riding hood. instead of little red riding hood i said little red riding kiwi

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