Narrative - Edited version

Ana walked through the forest trying to hunt for some food, when she noticed her enemies hiding in the bushes. They had been sent to capture her. She ran and ran until she saw a bush and jumped in trying to blend in. Soon she saw them pass by. She was relieved that they were gone and could not believe that she had survived that attempted assassination. Later that night when she fell asleep she dreamt that her village was being attacked.

The next day Ana was so scared that the enemies might sneak up and attack her village. She tried to warn the village, but they didn't believe her. She went out hunting again for some more food to feed her village. She spotted her biggest enemy called Maka and quickly hid. He had been sneaking around her village. He was her worst enemy besides the rest of his family. What was he up to?

After a while, Ana walked back to her village to warn them again about what she had seen, but they still didn't believe her. Some of the warriors listened to her and prepared their weapons just in case. The villagers were preparing a large feast for the chief. There were chickens, pigs, taro and coconut drink being prepared. Everyone was looking forward to the feast.

Suddenly, out of nowhere a spear went soaring past and hit a tree. The villagers soon realised that Ana was telling the truth. She ran and tried to get her spear but some one grabbed her and pushed her to the ground. Ana fainted.

Luckily the warriors in Ana's village were very strong and defeated the enemies. Maka was captured and the rest of the enemies surrendered. Everyone was thankful to Ana for warning them. She was a hero.

Task Description:My task was to write a story about a warrior.I drew a picture that goes with it.I had to use vocabulary and punctuation the picture is for the art exhibition.